The Sadness,


  • Sadness

    The Sadness,

    I’ve grown so weary of this lonely feeling,

    I cannot find the strength to continue concealing,

    The sadness that dwells within 


    It leaves me empty, consuming emotion,

    Life has become devoid of devotion,

    My days, dreaming of ways to set myself free


    Life without happiness is merely living through hell,

    When I made my wish, empty was the well,

    I’ll go silently, so not to stir a commotion


    You will not know the time or place,

    When I choose to accept disgrace

    But do know, I will be remembering your face,


    Should I sit or should I kneel?

    Heavy is the feel, so cold is the steel

    If anyone asks, just let 'em know,

    No longer could I deal

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    hippiegirl commented on The Sadness,


    awesome...such strong emotion, a beautiful a piece

    eddie14 commented on The Sadness,


    this was great i could relate i cant be free or stay free if i cant write. writing is my way out and relating to words so profound as these only inspire me to keep being free..

    ArgusWayne commented on The Sadness,


    An odd format, but powerful and addictive...I couldn't stop reading! Great write!

    jmschwartz commented on The Sadness,


    very powerful. love the way it kept me reading, i didn't get bored or lost at all. keep it up.

    daydreamer23 commented on The Sadness,


    wow man that was awesome you are talented my friend because that poem was perfect, looking forward to reading more of your work,bless.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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