The Secret Pain I Hide

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    Warning this poem may be drepressing and/or a trigger to depression I am not responsible for anything that you think or do when youy read this poem

    The Secret Pain I Hide

            A part of me screams inside

            To let me die

            I live a lie

            When all along I may never mend

            When deep inside I beg for the end

            In my mind it whispers sweetly

            I'm always silently weeping

            Plaguing my soul screaming in my head

            I am lost, gone, alone, and dead.

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    SunnyRain commented on The Secret Pain I Hide

    12-26-2011

    wow never have i found something that explained me so well. someone else feels like i do. and i thought i was alone.
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    Solaris

    01/09/2012

    thank you darlin try reading "Time And Death Go A Whoring" I think you will like that one

    xXLoveHurtsXx commented on The Secret Pain I Hide

    07-05-2011

    Wow...I can relate to this, and it puts my feelings into words perfectly. This left me speechless. Thank you for posting this.
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    Solaris

    07/09/2011

    Your welcome I'm glad i can reflect upon you in such a way

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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