The Seriousness

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serious tone used :3

The Seriousness

The Seriousness

sinking in
im feeling
i cant find the ground
i feel like i will be
submerged forever in a hallow abyss of numb
i can take our love seriously
i really need you now
i don’t understand what happened
we were perfectly fine in my view
my heart is aching
my soul is in two
i know you feel the same

i can wait this out
if that means i can have you back
i want to hold you in my arms
have your warmth shattering my frozen heart
it will be painful
and somewhat frightening
but with you here to help me
i know we can get past this

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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