The Silence

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  • Amber041792
  • Keep your eyes open, you don't want to miss anything.

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Short and simple for today.

The Silence

How can something be so simple be so scary? It screams all your deep secrets, your fears, your regrets, your life's pain. It doesn't care if you are the coolest kid in scool or the nerdest peron in the world, it will find a way into your head. Although it doesn't make a sound, it is the loudest sound in the room. How can the silence be so loud in a crowded room?

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Artie commented on The Silence

12-16-2010

I like this. No matter which side of the fence we are on, we all all victim to the same feelings and fears. Maybe the specifics are different, but the bottomline is the same. That silence can mean many different things. Nicely done - 10 from me

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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