The Sounds of a Broken Heart

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The Sounds of a Broken Heart

Happy in the darkness, and at peace with the silence,

Now the dawn has come, and the noises are the reality at every corner,

Standing here naked open to the pain,

Seeing the light as it burns through the heart that’s torn wide open,

No one sees,

Only passes by,

As the painful howls pull deep from the broken heart,

The mind is busy with the pain of the past while the body barely moves,

Emotions hitting like the waves on the sand,

Thoughts are so loud they are deafening,

Thoughts are dark,

Happy in the misery with no desire to change,

Only struggle,

Struggle with the grief,

The pounding in the mind struggling with the grief,

The world moves while the body is motionless,

The mind rejoices as the dark has come back, and silence is its only friend,

Exhausted from the full stream of pain letting the thoughts fall silent in the mind

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imalwasymused commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

01-05-2011

i can't imagine to feel pain like that and hope to never. This poem is dark but beautifully crafted. It's soooo emotional. You have a jewel here. It's brilliant.

FranzJ commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

12-30-2010

letting your emotions the a good thing to do - and you did so in this-thanks for sharing

slimgoodwoody commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

12-29-2010

WOW! "Happy in the misery..." What powerful words! You do yourself well with this poem B.H., keep it up!

BreeLove commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

12-29-2010

I have been here, and its a hard place to come back from. No matter how u got there or the circumstances, there is light at the end of the darkness......... :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

BrokenHeart2009’s Poems (33)

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Let Go 5
A Crush 1
Waiting For An Answer 2
Creepy 3
Question 2
Endless Fall 2
Men Are People 26
Final Words 11
A Gift to Mankind 6
Together We Say Goodbye 6
Your Wife 9
No One to Save Me From The Dark 5
In The Beginning 3
You And Me 1
My Daughters 7
Lonely 4
Don't Leave 2
The Sounds of a Broken Heart 4
Regret 7
Twisted 7
Hold Your Vows 4
Love's Bite 3
Shame On Me For Being With You 11
The Kiss's Coal 2
You Reap What You Sow 5
In Love With A Lie 5
My Story 5
Warning 2
Leave Me 2
What Do We DO? 3
Goodbye and a Smile 3
Adultery's Shame 4
The Sound of No One 3