The Spider's Web

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    The Spider's Web

    You are the spider.......... I am your prey
    You have spun your web around me and I can't get away.
    I struggle to be released from your hold, but everytime I do my body gets weak and my blood runs cold.
    Although your web pulls me tight, I need your love, so I do not fight.
    I allow you to suck my body dry of all the real things it needs to grow inside.
    I ask myself " How do I set myself free? Will I ever be whole again?
    Is there even a "ME"?

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    FLAWLES commented on The Spider's Web

    09-03-2010

    You are very creative with you feelings. You're good girl. Sometimes you gotta spin your web first.

    GucciGurl

    09/11/2010

    NOW FRIEND U KNOW THIS A WOMEN THAT WAS HURTIN DEEPLY AT THAT TIME....I DID FIND LOVE AGAIN...NOT THE SAME ...BUT MY HEART DID HEAL

    ginga commented on The Spider's Web

    02-15-2010

    gucci, There is so much here that mirrors life and alludes to how humans are used by leeches who try and take control. I liked how you postured the spider as the controller. ginga

    GucciGurl

    02/15/2010

    Thanxs. The spider always wants to control but read the last one I just posted called It's Time.

    cliftondurant commented on The Spider's Web

    02-15-2010

    i love it gucci well written short but sweet good job

    GucciGurl

    02/15/2010

    Thanxs. To bad it had to happen to write it.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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    If I had only Known 2
    Sorry 2
    It's Time 2
    The Spider's Web 5
    Weep 2
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    Just Another Player 4
    The Waiting is Over 5
    Time for thr Me to see My Baby 4
    Leave Me Alone 4
    Gucci Pill/ Secret Friend 3 5
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    I Will Learn to Love Again 4
    Make It All Go Away 0
    I Never Wanted 0
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    Reaching Out 3
    My Load 3
    Long Hard Stick 24
    Free 2
    Destiny for us all 3
    The Days are Getting Closer 1
    This Errie Feeling 0
    The Picture 2
    I Miss My Baby/ Secret Friend 3
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    My Secret Friend 16
    You Again 6
    I Can't Anymore 2
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    Pain 6
    Wake Me When it's over 5
    F-ME UP AGAIN 11
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    Sanity 5
    To Make You Understand 9