The Spirit of The Dolphin

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  • SexzAngel
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The Spirit of The Dolphin

Dolphins are such free spirits,
and pretty much do as they please.
They dance in the clear blue water,
they swim in the cool nights breeze.
They love each other for a life time,
and never do they stray.
So be like the dolphin,
and let your heart out to play.


I would love to swim in their sunshine,
and have a love that lasts.
But is that just ment for dolphins,
who have no fear of a past?

I wonder, can you see the truth,
of what i tell you right now.
Or is it in the proof,
that you simply dont know how?

Let your spirits be set free,
and sing the songs of your heart.
To you my friend i send this plea,
so wont you do your part?

Dont let the burdens along your trail,
make you shed those tears.
For love and laughter will never fail,
to sooth away your fears.

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Qualin commented on The Spirit of The Dolphin

12-02-2009

I really like this no fancy words just the truth very good....an unending Love how can it fail? Qualin

SexzAngel

12/09/2009

Thank you Qualin, I am very glad to met ya..Take care, Angel

knight4696 commented on The Spirit of The Dolphin

11-04-2009

I like this one. It surprised me. I thought this was going to be about nature and dolphins, but you changed it to be a romantic plea. I like your style!! I really enjoyed it. I do agree with Laydbak's comment though ... It does seem to be missing some closure. Still a great job!!

Tempestlady commented on The Spirit of The Dolphin

10-10-2009

Great job. Enjoyed the imagery. Loved the message too. What are you doin up this late?

SexzAngel

10/10/2009

thanks again hun... just cant sleep.. to much on my mind i guess.. maybe just waiting for the meds to kick in...lol... Huge Hugzz...Angel

laydbak1 commented on The Spirit of The Dolphin

06-16-2009

The voice here starts with the playfulness and free spirits and bonded love of the dolphins then draws an analogy to a real life lover who's holding back... I was waiting for the ending to bring the dolphin's unwavering love back into the picture to reinforce the plea, but it didn't come... still a good write...

SexzAngel

06/17/2009

Yes Yes Yes..i see it now..it is complete. You know i never saw that missing part before. sometimes it is so hard to see things when its your own words. Wow you dont know how much i thank you. Hugest of hugs. Angel

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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