"The Stillness Of Quiet Light"

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    Those who take long steps cannot keep the pace –– Tao Te Ching

    "The Stillness Of Quiet Light"

    The distance between
    here and beyond
    even farther
    this thing we call there
    the separation

    If simply to stop
    to look or
    to not speak
    but to listen as
    silence listens

    We are moved
    by stillness
    as if to know
    everything is to remember
    the beauty we have forgotten

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    from my manuscript-in-progress: inheritance

    ©dah / dahlusion 2018 a.r.r.

    The Stillness Of Quiet Light was first published in
    Ethos Literary Journal (India)

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    Altair commented on "The Stillness Of Quiet Light"

    09-18-2018

    Good to see a familiar face, post something again. Your expressions always intrigued me, and this one is no different in essence. I suppose what I gather from this is appreciation for that which is the all of things by simply absorbing the wonders of the senses or lack thereof. I can dig it.
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    dahlusion

    09/20/2018

    This critique is spot on. Once again, Altair, you have exposed my inner-self, your inner-self, in another fine critique. Thank you! ––))

    jademelissa74 commented on "The Stillness Of Quiet Light"

    09-14-2018

    "The Stillness of Quiet Light" Intriguing title....I am glad I stopped by today. You make the reader engage with the stillness of life as is. One can feel their own formless and timeless reality as the manifested life that animates the physical form. You looked beyond the veil of the inevitable separation created by every day's routine and gave us a visual of the hidden beauty. Well articulated and the painted imagery managed to embrace my undivided attention. Excellent piece Dah!
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    dahlusion

    09/14/2018

    Always a pleasure to hear from you, and to know that this piece resonates within you, for you. I stop by OP a couple of times per year, and I'm glad that I did today. Thank you for this fine critique, jademelissa! ––))

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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