The storm

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    this poem is when you are going trought bad moments in  your life that you realize you are not alone it ....you have or could have help from family friends,poeple that cares .by the Lord God.and etc.things will changed just hold one to whatever you can.hope you like it...

    The storm

      In the middle of the storm i stand,not knowing what to do next?where to go?how to survive?At the same time am having all differents feelings and emotionsthat makes the storm stronger.

    I am feeling sad,lonely and hurt also i don't know what or where to go ?what to do with myself?but one thing i do know or understand is that this storm will not win over my life ,my peace,my joy.........


    Even though the rainis stronger as the  thunder and just like the winds.all this is making the storm the stronger one.also is getting as dark as complicated as it gets...

    I'm wondering when the storm will end and if i will win this one...or how long will last this storm?I think that everything will get back to the right place when the sotrm finished.i'm keeping myself with the thought of hope and with faith that the storm will finished soon.and that i be able to see the sunlight soon.as my emotions start to feel more better,like joy,peace,love and to know that i might have  a lot work to do after the storm ends.

    so everything be alright or as closer it gets.i will alwyas remember that i have what i need it ;which is hope and faith to be alright.also the love of my family and the people that loves me,truely at all times....

    I also have God to help me.am not alone in the middle of the storm.... 

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    boomboom56 commented on The storm

    11-14-2009

    The raw energy in this piece is good. W e have all been right in the middle of our own storms, so this hits home as I read. It is full of depressing words and feelings, but you lift them away in your last couple of bars. Well done.

    spbsdude commented on The storm

    09-29-2009

    There are many storms in life and how we endure them and what we learn is a great measure of who we are. "Trust in the Lord in all thy doings..." and he will help you. Nice read for me.

    narda58 commented on The storm

    09-22-2009

    Great poem Aries keep up the good work. i like your expressions.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

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