The storm

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    The storm

    Anchor hold on tight
    the sea is raging
    all throughout the night
    grasp hold
    ship shaking in the sea
    don’t move now
    drop deep
    anchor go go
    don’t stop till you hold this boat
    arms of the ship stretch out far
    hold on tight
    it’s a rough night
    waves crashing on the deck
    never know if we will wreck
    sea man of the sea
    hold this ship hold for me
    morning comes
    and now we know
    victory comes
    after a storm.
    R.L.R.
    2/8/2010

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    jenniferwhorley commented on The storm

    02-09-2010

    You write very inspiring words. I enjoy reading them and gaining some insight from your words.

    windflower101 commented on The storm

    02-08-2010

    I love this. It's a great analogy of the storms we face in life. No matter how rough the storm is, when we know our anchor is secure there is always great victory. Good

    Hampton commented on The storm

    02-08-2010

    A well crafted write that uses the destructive power of storms in a positive manner as it speaks of the peace that follows.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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