The Storm

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going through a rough time in my life at the moment

The Storm

The tide is turning,

the seawater is filling my lungs.

I still push forward

to reach a gasp of air.

I'm fighting against the current

and the storm,

reaching one arm out

then the other

kicking away in the water,

striving for survival.

The rain is pounding

on my pale flesh

like shards of glass,

piercing my eyes

disfiguring my skin,

trying to reach

the calmer waters

 

The sounds of the sea

around me,

 my nostrils flare

fighting  for a chance

to inhale the air,

fighting for my survival,

being pulled down by the current,

pushing onward

to escape its grasp

being robbed of energy.

in waves of the dark sea,

trying to reach

the calmer waters.

 

Something is grasping at me

trying to pull me under,

to take me with it,

I push onward,

stroke after stroke

breath after breath,

striving to succeed,

swimming for survival,

the wind and waves and rain

whistle loudly in my ears,

salt water burns my eyes

pierces my skin,

onward I push,

untill I make it

to the calmer waters.

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banginmoma commented on The Storm

09-03-2011

thank you. its just a battle between things going on in life, looking for the clear sky

windsongs commented on The Storm

08-07-2011

white and blu polkadots in a tranquil sea, youll make it to shore! great write!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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