The Storm

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  • Dark Poetry

    The Storm
    Lightning strikes from outstretched hands
    Invading the dark corners of my mind
    Adding more grief to aggravate my sorrow

    Silence fills in behind the thunderous crashes
    Of a suffocating rage that never quiets
    Like soil closing over my grave

    Lost in an overwhelming sea of emotions
    Drowning in a past of whispered lies
    Choking on waves of relentless tears

    Lying hidden within the folds of crimson colored gown
    Embroidered with smoke and ash
    I shine beneath the cracks in the evening sky.



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    DeepEclipse commented on The Storm

    06-15-2009

    I like how this poem keeps me adrift in metaphors, never letting me touch the ground, keeping me soaring among feelings of expressiveness.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on The Storm

    03-26-2009

    LOVE IT! i love the first to lines and how you can feel the ligitning in the air... great imagry!@
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    lonewolf commented on The Storm

    03-24-2009

    dark, yet I sense the presence of a coming light. and with light, there is hope. very nice young lady. i always enjoy your poetry, whether they're dark, love, aor funny. you are incredibly talented.
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    WordSlinger commented on The Storm

    03-24-2009

    Shine on, :)
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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