The Suffering


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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    The Suffering

    Lost within a tattered body is a shattered soul
    A hopeless dream closed behind a locked door
    A heart shot down..broken and sore...
    My eyes bleed dry as my tears hit the floor
    The Pain..has crippled my faith
    I can't love through the gore
    Your Deception has stained the truth
    Why trust you...what for
    This has killed me from the inside
    and my body's left torn..
    No look toward..
    As i stare in my mirror with a god awful grin
    I realized my pain was all from within
    So right threw the heart..
    I took my own life..
    Blood ran down the blade dripping off of the knife..
    I smiled with glee..Just as we once did before..
    I said "see you in hell" I shall suffer no more..

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    MootPoint commented on The Suffering


    Yes, very dark. Good write. Please read my Dark Pscyho and They Screech.

    JadedGoddess commented on The Suffering


    I really liked this. I've definitely been there before myself.

    Zephyr commented on The Suffering


    Sometimes, suicide seems like the best option. I know that I've been there. But you, you have put feelings into words, a feat that I cannot perform. Very well done.

    anneliseh commented on The Suffering


    i really have no words to describe what went through me while reading this. but in a good way.

    robynize commented on The Suffering


    I really like the beginning, but when you get to the knife, it shocked and scared me!! But that is good! I love this best " Your Deception has stained the truth, why trust you, what for" I've been through that. You captured the despair and pain eloquently and with depth. Great work!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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