The Thief

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  • Emotional
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  • Passion
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  • Confusion
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  • Anger

    Poem Commentary

    We all Have A Theif Amongst us, In us, Defends Us, and Somehow mends us

    The Thief

    Theres a theif inside of me

    He is saying why to me

    Why so nice why so polite

    Why are you hiding me

    My anger let loose

    You hold tight like a noose

    Your strangling me disarranging me

    My anger can you see, is it you, is it me

    Is there a sun through your clouds

    Sunny but constantly raining down

    Raping you with their words plainly

    You laugh and smile while thinking insanely

    Prove yourself, loose yourself

    It's in you, I'll begin with you

    Hear my call

    Drop jaws shock-em all

    Sincerely, The theif inside of you.

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    Crush commented on The Thief

    12-05-2009

    "Your ( maybe, you're ) strangling me disarranging me..." is beautiful. there is pain in your words, have read a few but there is also a hope that is tugging and a spirit that is standing high. very nice.
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    CasimirJash commented on The Thief

    09-04-2009

    self-confidence, I can relate 100%, sometimes I want to prove'em wrong, shock'em all to show that I more then what you think of me. Great insght
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