The Thrones Of Mankind

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Thru thy blind eyes .. the future's foretold .......

The Thrones Of Mankind

It takes a kind heart to tame an evil mind,
Like those of the rulers  -
Of the Thrones of Mankind.
Evil Philosopher . . Tell me what do you see?
Are they planning somethin' -
Deceitful for thee?
~~~
"Read'em and weep . . The cards of misfortune,
Somehow it seems -
We all get our portion.
The Ace of Spades means death to us all,
Thru the clouds of haze -
Within the Crystal Ball!"

= = = = =
Evil awaits you - - Come right in,
Lurkin' in darkness ~ Drownin' in sin.
Evil awaits you on the edge of time,
Along with the Rulers of the Thrones of Mankind!
= = = = =

Just as it once was in history,
Evil Philosopher -
Tell me what can it be?
~~~
"Despise if you like,
What there is to conceive.
But sooner or later,
We all shall have grief!"
+++++
 War will break-out,
Just about everywhere.
But don't worry child - No, don't you despair.
For thru thy blind eyes,
The future's foretold.
Darkness shall fall and Light shall unfold!"

= = = = =
Evil awaits you - - Come right in,
Lurkin' in darkness ~ Drownin' in sin.
Evil awaits you on the edge of time,
Along with the Rulers of the Thrones of Mankind!
= = = = =
 
                                                                KjK
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am2anangel commented on The Thrones Of Mankind

02-04-2010

Just a suggestion; I thought perhaps the line-"we all shall have grief." would have flowed better as we all shall have to grieve.Just a thought. Not trying to change your work. Great job once again.

knight4696

02/06/2010

Thanks again Angel , well you certainly have been busy reading! :) Thanks for all the wonderful reads and comments Much Appreciated my friend!! :) I also appreciate your suggestion .. I will be maintaining it as is - because it is a song lyric and the syllable count is not as strict as in poetry for flow .. One syllable can be made to sound like 10 when carrying a note. Thanks again, I appreciate all suggestions and honest criticism ... it helps me to become more conscience of what I write and helps me to grow as an artist. Thank you very much my friend! :) I really appreciate it! :) Ken

stellar commented on The Thrones Of Mankind

12-17-2009

Ahhh...knight..love this so much...it is kind of a prophet style..and i always love anything associated with the ancients,,,I love ancient history lol...^_^ v

knight4696

12/17/2009

Thanks Stellar! :) Me too! I like Medieval stuff! Afterall I am a Knight! lol! :) Thanks again, Ken

stellar

12/18/2009

Ahhh...lol..so that's why that pic looks like the helmet from LOTR,,,my ever fav. movie...

knight4696

12/18/2009

That too, But it is also my last name!

Rhymer commented on The Thrones Of Mankind

12-12-2009

This one goes into my favorites, an excellent write 10 from me

knight4696

12/13/2009

Thank you very much Rhymer! I appreciate the 10 and the Faves! :) ... Ken

MarionYost commented on The Thrones Of Mankind

12-10-2009

Hell yeah! You're .... I'm speechless.. Great job this is a 10. All the best -Marion-

knight4696

12/10/2009

:) Me too. Your comments tend to leave me that way! :) Thx, Ken

Rygar commented on The Thrones Of Mankind

11-26-2009

awesome write ken, i love the dark side of poetry , it draws me in and this is an exceptional piece man, keep writing!

knight4696

11/27/2009

Thx Ry! I enjoy the dark side immensely. I love reading and writing about it. I think it's the creativity involved. It usually takes more thought and imagination to create than the softer side. Thx again, Ken

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