The Tree in The Meadow

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    The Tree in The Meadow

    Lady I know you own this land
    But I'm here to tell you something
    And I hope you'll understand

    See we lived here long ago
    My husband and I... and
    Well I just want you to know

    That big tree out yonder in the meadow
    It's a big oak we planted
    And with love we helped it grow

    Well ma'am I was passing through
    I stopped in a local diner
    And I heard the sad news

    They said that Miss June
    Was hiring for that tree
    To be cut down soon

    I rose from the diner table
    and drove here straight away
    To talk you out of it if I'm able

    Ma'am please take a walk with me
    Out to the meadow
    To that big oak tree

    May I please hold on to you
    For I no longer walk so well
    And my days left are short and few

    Now Miss June see this heart
    It was carved for me
    I fell for him from the start

    See ma'am here is my name
    And he carved his neath mine
    We added more each time we came

    Carved here, River Dove loves Lee
    He was my one and only
    We loved neath this old tree

    Look at this Ma'am, look right here
    "River Dove, If I die before you
    Do you need a moment ma'am to dry your tears

    If not then I'll read on
    Lay me neath this old tree
    I'll be here waiting when you come along

    It's been a long time now ma'am
    Since he has been gone
    And now I have come along

    I see him ma'am he is waiting for me
    The love of my life
    Is standing by our tree

    See these words I carved here
    It's my reply to what he carved for me
    Your wait is over my love... I am here

    By Rita Kay Webb

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    julieannetx commented on The Tree in The Meadow

    11-17-2010

    Beautiful story...your writing comes from your heart and touches the reader deeply. Keep up the good work.

    Springsize commented on The Tree in The Meadow

    11-16-2010

    Oh, this poem is a story, a ballad ...I like the way you employ visuals (the tree, the changing additions to the tree, surrounding the tree through time/years) to retain the essence of your time there... really nice work here, start to finish.... beautiful love, the kind that makes me smile...

    koolmom0

    11/16/2010

    Thank you so much, it was a sad but pleasurable write. I am so glad you like it. :) Rita

    MindNumbing commented on The Tree in The Meadow

    11-16-2010

    I love this heartbreaking little story, Rita... I'm a major tree-hugger, so I knew from the title that this would be something I could connect with. I had no idea what a lovely story I would fall into, though. This is awesome, thanks so much for sharing!

    koolmom0

    11/16/2010

    Thank you so much for reading for me. :) Rita

    kdarcy commented on The Tree in The Meadow

    11-13-2010

    AAAhhhhhhhhh, what of the love stories, where have they all gone? It used to be thats all you heard in a song, so much for that. Enjoyed the write, I'll return soon, be well k

    koolmom0

    11/13/2010

    Thank you Darcy for reading for me. It is greatly appreciated. :) Rita

    2poemsforu commented on The Tree in The Meadow

    11-12-2010

    Tree poems are the best and the family connection is heartfelt. ginga

    koolmom0

    11/13/2010

    Thank you Ginga, it is so good to hear from you...:) Rita

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