The Troll (part 1)

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Not so much a poem, but a short little story.  There are a total of 4 parts to this, I hope you enjoy.

The Troll (part 1)

The bed began to shudder

There was a horrendous growl from beneath

The house began to tremble and shake

A high pitched keening ensued

While pictures tumbled from their perches along the walls

And vases shattered spilling their fragrant contents.

 

I continued to hear the low growling

Amidst the rumbling of the house

Which quickly elevated along the decibel scale

Until it became a deep guttural roar.

 

With the genesis of this terrible noise

The bed exploded

And spewed it shrapnel throughout the room

Shards of which impaled the ceiling, the walls, and the floor.

 

In the midst of the destruction

I saw my nightmare manifest before me…

 

 

 

 

 

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TheAngelOfDeath commented on The Troll (part 1)

09-23-2009

Amazing.. Love it! you stole my seres idea i see.. :) I will Read and rate all of them as i get time. TTYL Ill Read as many as i can tomorow But right now i gots to go BYE

soulwriter commented on The Troll (part 1)

09-11-2009

I saw everything manifest before me... word for word my senses expected the unexpected - I now want more. Great talent manifesting as always~ Onward I travel your journey. 10

Singcanary commented on The Troll (part 1)

09-05-2009

love the word flow and choices... the imagery is great

Phoenix9 commented on The Troll (part 1)

09-05-2009

very descriptive, I saw it all frame by frame, felt and heard everything, very well done, impressed as usual by your never ending talent.

bandit1192 commented on The Troll (part 1)

09-05-2009

An excellant beginning. Can't wait to see the nightmare that appears before you. Visuals were great, as always. TS

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

beautifuldeath’s Poems (45)

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Title Comments
A.P.B 3
Obsessive Cruelty 4
Fiendish Night 4
Trying To Hold On 4
Dark Inspiration 14
The Troll (final...) 7
The Troll (part 3) 3
The Troll (part 2) 2
The Troll (part 1) 5
Vividly Dark 17
Mistress of the Dark 7
If I could not be there 11
Sanguine Kiss 5
Crescendo 7
Fallen 8
Death's Kiss 11
Stained 9
Dream Phantom 14
Gossamer Heart 8
Shadow Kissed 16
Ravenous 9
Hypnotized by Darkness 42
Unwilling 10
Dementia Defined 9
Forever Never 10
Birthday Kite 7
Little Girl Lost 9
Obsidian Butterfly 12
The Storm 4
Vampire's Smile 11
Dark Heart 7
Beautiful Death 9
Done 7
Human 12
Black Despondency 7
Never Try 4
Addicted 9
Repentant Regret 10
That Moment 3
Death's Interrogation 10
Buried Within 23
Perceiving the Poet 10
The Comfort Of Innocence 4
Bloody Tears 27
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