The Two Rainbows

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    Ripped from the pages of my journal...Yeah I keep a journal...If Captain Kirk can keep a log of his journey through space, I can at least keep a journal through my journey...Its not a diary, so watch it :P

    The Two Rainbows

    Gray clouds
    Sky's full
    The rain comin' down soon and that's no bull
    I'm outside my house miles away
    Dang it!....
    I forgot my umbrella today
    Sprinkle, sprinkle
    here comes the rain
    Drip, drip
    the waters' stain
    Run, run
    as I complain
    about the water on my head leaking to my brain
    Oh how I wish for blue skies
    as the rain continued to soak my big brown eyes
    I began to sing to myself as my wet shirt sway
    "Rain, rain please go away"
    Clouds heavy
    Thunder roars
    When it rains,  it really pours
    I finally made it home
    But not before I got soaked to the bone
    I'm glad to be here, as I let out a shout
    Dang it sun, now you come out!
    I peer out my window as the sunlight begins to show
    The Lord just made my lil smile grow
    I've just witnessed the appearance of two rainbows

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    1990lh commented on The Two Rainbows

    10-02-2009

    hahaha this was cool a lil different than your other i read but still good though i think we all have had one of those day great job
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    melki18 commented on The Two Rainbows

    08-16-2009

    This is a pretty sweet poem.. Made me smile and think of how many times the sun came out right after i needed it to. Nice job!
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    jennifer2585 commented on The Two Rainbows

    08-16-2009

    hey rainbow you can be such an inspiration to the young crowed. you rock.
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    jennifer2585

    08/16/2009

    sorry seven got the rainbow poem in my mind still...lol

    KLF commented on The Two Rainbows

    06-07-2009

    Yes, Seven, I have to agree with Writer1. I have read this one, "Lying Azz B" and "Too Black, Too Strong" Their rhythm is like rap. I read them all like that. It's not bad, they sound good, flow very well and make you want to read more. Actually, they make me want to hear more. Good work.
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    Thank you

    Chi commented on The Two Rainbows

    06-03-2009

    You my rainbow Seven ......... this poem is hot and you are a wonderful poet......super creative and you work is enjoyable to read. I'm gonna hit you with a 75 rating on this poem. Much love my brother. Chi.
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    SEVEN

    06/04/2009

    Thank you..

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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