The Unborn

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

The Unborn

Complacations
Make my words no longer mine
Griping sensations
Tear a whole in the mind
Fear of the unknown
Limits Mankind
Give your hate to the unborn
They can't effect your life!

I live my life for no-one
but for my own design
I kick the feeling of love hate and war
all to the side
Im a demon to some who judge me
Im idol to few
I want no-one condolences
I live for me not you

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Dragon commented on The Unborn

12-08-2009

A great poem... love the last line... i'm adding to my favorites

jonnydgo commented on The Unborn

06-23-2009

I love you line .......... it's so thoughtful............ it says more of your real you.

FiloRozzell commented on The Unborn

04-29-2009

Very nice my friend, good ride...

bandit1192 commented on The Unborn

02-28-2009

Good poem. Be who you are. Don't change to suit others. TS

beautifuldeath commented on The Unborn

02-28-2009

"I live for me not you" love that line. excellently written. Loved it

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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"The Maniac Part 7" 4
"The Maniac Part 6" 5
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