The unknown me...

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    The unknown me...

    I have an amazing garden
    a secret lonely place
    where I meet myself and seek pardon
    for all I am supposed to do ,an dont,
    for all I had done which i am not supposed to do
    this garden is full of flowers ,
    exceedingly beautiful
    for I am their creator,mentor and gardener
    the fruits too are sweet
    for at times they are forbidden,
    sinful and lusty
    the only road is inside
    there is no coming out ,I am the holder of the key to paradise
    talk, preach,  argue
    laugh ,cry,shout
    all forms of communications are mine
    I am the Master of this secret garden.
    Sorry ,but I cant let u in .its the only place
    where I meet myself,
    the self which no one knows
    the self which is weak ,sinful,broken ,
    the unkown me.

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    DeepEclipse commented on The unknown me...

    07-20-2009

    A place where your honesty can run rampant. You have crafted a place that I long for. The struggle is tiring. That place sounds comforting. A place to recieve the love we look for. Excellent.

    monica83

    07/21/2009

    thanku ever so much..I appreciate ur response and will try to pen more of my inner feeling .

    wheelsal commented on The unknown me...

    07-20-2009

    We all have our secret garden. Keep it for comfort. And keep writing. a poet friend. Sally

    monica83

    07/20/2009

    thanku so much for ur words..do read "love beyond bounderies"

    cliftondurant commented on The unknown me...

    07-20-2009

    we all have that secret closet where we go and work thing out a place of peice good job

    monica83

    07/20/2009

    thanku for encouraging me...do read my other poems also and comment.

    bforibus commented on The unknown me...

    07-20-2009

    this is a beautiful tribute to self-exploration of the mind. being able to find that one place that you are tranquil and at peace is a maginifect attribute and a safety mechanism that is implanted in us. very good poem.

    monica83

    07/20/2009

    thanku so much...continue to uphold

    Artie commented on The unknown me...

    07-10-2009

    Sounds like the world that exists within yourself is a very nice, and somewhat, naughty place. Very nice.

    monica83

    07/10/2009

    thanks keep encouraging.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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