The vision

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  • Inner Self

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    On so many levels

    The vision

        My Eyes feel, What my heart  says, As my    lips   deliver ,what your Ears  will hear, to the core of  your conscience , its simple and clear ,for that we are searching has always been here                                                                                              Enlightenment  ~                            





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    deni2u commented on The vision

    03-18-2010

    thank you all for your ratings I still cant believe it came into form inside of 2 minutes
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    gogant commented on The vision

    10-23-2009

    We can spend an eternity searching for something...and then one day, it's perfectly clear that we had already found it...........g
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    deni2u

    10/23/2009

    exactly !!!! what I said thank you

    Marsink commented on The vision

    10-21-2009

    deni, really enjoyed this enough to read three x's Awesome delivery in concept and theme.
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    deni2u

    10/22/2009

    Thank I value your opinion

    MrGee commented on The vision

    10-12-2009

    I like this concise poem. It expresses the emotions of the author and paints an excellent picture in my mind. I especially like the metaphor - the core of your conscience. The style of this work is somewhat like the style that i write. I wonder if that is a good thing? anyway, I gladly rate this poem a 10
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    Russ commented on The vision

    10-11-2009

    Be proud. A quick to the point read. The first of your work I have read. Enjoyed. Thank you.
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    deni2u

    10/11/2009

    inspired by your words and as a result i turned out a few more today I have not put words in print for a very very long time and in just a few hours i turned out the vision , nothing, and the beginning and i am pleased with the transfer of thought to word thank you

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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