The Voice Inside my Head

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this is true Howard and Evan are the representations of my inhabithion and then some.

The Voice Inside my Head

Those voices inside my head telling me right and wrong
They tell me you suck and don't forget be strong
They push me to do my best and push me to the ground
Some time they just need to be lost and never found

These voices are friends when I have none
But then again they are part of the reason
The reason sometimes I just want to die
For they know me better than I know I

One is forty the other only five
Howard the old and Evan the alive
Howard is the you better stop while you can
And Evan the go for it man

Two opposite personalities in my mind
It is time for them to stop and let me do my own find
I need them I hate them I can't tell
If I should get them out or guard them well.

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Lunabella commented on The Voice Inside my Head

01-22-2011

Nice sweetie i have the same thing in my head but it's Julia, Tammy, Chris, Cory, Josh, and Izzy...boy do they fight *sighs* but its a good write sweetie :D

jj1562

01/22/2011

they keep me sane even if they arent always but isnt that how the mind works

CDWillams commented on The Voice Inside my Head

10-04-2010

I love your style of writing. You just seem to have this great potential unseen in many.

earthly commented on The Voice Inside my Head

09-04-2010

Like, you just hope the voices jive-lol-namaste...Earthly

sk8erpoet commented on The Voice Inside my Head

08-30-2010

i love this....sometimes when you think the voices are not meant to be heard that is what you need to hear.....great write...sk8

Jcdell commented on The Voice Inside my Head

07-22-2010

I Dont blame you and the voice inside I only blame the voice you have to hide. Sometimes voices inside are really the voices you need to hear coz it´s conscious that is gonna remind you and it´s your heart and no body elses that is gonna judge.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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