The Void


  • Philosophy

    The Void

    From light I was born,
    in darkness I live...
    For eternity I survive,
    this fate unescapable...
    yet felt by all...
    I mimic all things,
    still I change reality...
    My element is the Void...
    I am shadow...

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    BringMeBullets commented on The Void


    "I am shadow." You have the mind of an artist, and this is obvious through this write... You are so talented, it just blows my mind! You use descriptions that are unthinkable until I read them on this screen. I am impressed at your talent. Keep writing, you're very good at it. Thank you for sharing.

    MrGee commented on The Void


    Interesting poem. Concise and very philosophical. I question the word "unescapable" but, then Poetic license allows the use of the word. Be that what it may I still find the poem very written. a 10

    Chaos128 commented on The Void


    DarkChi is absolutely correct, it is not only deep, it's literate. I saw your profile, it's hard to believe you're only ten. You've got a very bright ahead of you.

    knight4696 commented on The Void


    Very deep Kage. Appears you have the talent to express your thoughts in a very clear and concise manner. I enjoy poetry that says a lot in a few words. Good job.

    DarkChi commented on The Void


    neat. i love how it's written and it's deep. keep writing you'll get tonz better

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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