The Vow

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    love is eternal

    The Vow

    for when we ride the last sun set our souls will always be joined as one never knowing where we are our heart will bare that scar dream of me unto this night our souls shall unite deep with our dreams unknowing where sun light beam shines through we will know with in a dream how true love truly shines through my heart shall always belong to you until our vows are forever inter twined you will never be mine for when i say i do my soul my heart belongs to you now and forever i do

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    Karma885 commented on The Vow

    01-09-2010

    SO CUTE POEM MADE ME TEARY EYE'D SO ROMANTIC IN A WAY.GOOD JOB IT GETS A TEN. BE SURE TO COMMENT ON MY RECENT POEMS

    shanny8917 commented on The Vow

    07-03-2009

    I really like this vow. It is what every woman wants to hear. It is very heartfelt.

    Karma885 commented on The Vow

    07-03-2009

    OMG I GOT A TEAR IN MY EYE THAT IS A SUCH A TOUCHING POEM. I LOVE POEMS LIKE THIS SO MUCH FEELIN. I LIKE READIN POEMS LIKE THIS FROM A MAN . YOU GET SEE THER POINT OF VIEWS BRAVO HUN CAN U READ ONE OF POEMS AND COMMENT THANK U

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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