THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

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    • EG3RED
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    THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

     TODAY I SIT HERE IN PAIN, DROWNING IN SORROW.

    I WONDER WHAT NOW I CAN HOPE FOR TOMORROW.

    IN SUSPENSE I REMAIN UNTIL THINGS TAKE THEIR PLACE.

    BUT LIVING LIKE THIS, I WOULD MUCH RATHER BE DEAD.

    YET I STILL HAVE HOPE AND STAY DETERMINE TO WIN.

    EVEN IN THIS MISERY I AM STILL WILLING TO LIVE.

    HOW MUCH OF THIS TORTURE AM I WILLING TO WITHSTAND.

    WHEN ALL MY LOVE IS WASHING AWAY IN SAND.

    CONSIDERING MY CIRCUMSTANCES I LOVE MY LIFE.

    AND EVEN TILL THIS DAY I WOULD MAKE HER MY WIFE.

    I JUST HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE TIME IS RIGHT. 

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    Sydney commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-21-2010

    this is really good. hope things work out. this has really evolved. this is a wonderful poem. -Sydney
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    YEAH IT HAS ALREADY WE ARE IN GOOD STANDING!

    KING commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-18-2010

    Your feelings you put them all there for all to see. I wonder if your lost love knows of your talent to write. Perhaps in that, hope can bring u back together or take you to other avenues of life. Good piece man!
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    THANK YOU!

    queeniecup commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-18-2010

    Imagine how many people will be able to empathize with these words!!! Very good rendition of emotions.
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    THANK YOU!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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