The Whispers of Time

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    The Whispers of Time

    As I walk through the snow and rain, I find my soul bleeding out into this perfect scene.

    I wait for the pain to hit, but all I feel is numb. Numb and stricken.

    Life has deserted me in my dire hour of need, and instead of fighting back with a vengeance, I have no fight left. I suck in oxygen without feeling it enter my lungs, and give myself over to the inevitable.

    I knew Heartache would come calling one day. He whispers in my ear and calls me his Companion. He craves to hold me, He says, and welcomingly opens His arms. Attempting to flee is futile so I edge closer and let the darkness envelope me.

    Now I shall never be free. I was doomed from the start.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on The Whispers of Time

    08-30-2010

    Nice and well rounded.... i like it. No looking back for refiguring.

    sk8erpoet commented on The Whispers of Time

    08-30-2010

    i seriously love this poem.....lots of emotion....great write...sk8

    Kaylimazza commented on The Whispers of Time

    02-15-2010

    Wow. it was really good. I'd say maybe make the font big or i think its me being blind. Anyways good job!

    sk8ergirl commented on The Whispers of Time

    01-21-2010

    I think this is a great write..........there is a lot of emotion in it.........great write......sk8

    lonewolf162 commented on The Whispers of Time

    01-21-2010

    wow i did one like this it wasnt as good as yours tho i think its super keep makein more

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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