The Wind of Death

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So much death and loss in my family and in the news lately. Thought i'd let my feelings out. Hope you enjoy. Write on...................

The Wind of Death

Death blew through today
took a thousand souls
and went on his way
Nothing to give, only to take
just left tears flowing in his wake.

I saw him on the news gloom
my dad says he was ever present
in the emergency room
opened the door for my nanny
she said no it's too soon.

Religious quarrels pave his way
hard economic times make his day,
no prayers or pleas are heard
just collecting souls, in the wind like a bird.

The storms, wars, and accidents
make it necessary to dig holes
to take the very young and very old
and those that always sell their souls.

Yes, death had a long day today
so hard to see the sorrow and
the young and the old beg and borrow.
The widows and the mothers crying
and so many dying.

It is a fact of life
we must go when we are through with the strife
a quarter for the ferryman
or to take the incarnation of death by the hand
either way we cannot stay.

Namaste....





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gmcookie commented on The Wind of Death

02-05-2014

But yet we can't surrender in the end For Death is never one we call a friend. Another thoughtful write, my friend. May your life be filled with happiness and your death indefinitely postponed!

Tempestlady

04/04/2014

WOW indefinitely huh. Well thanks. Hope yours is too......

cutbanksam commented on The Wind of Death

11-28-2013

I think of all your poems I have read that this is by far the best. It is more than excellent and very powerful. We have all been there and felt the terrible pain of loss. I can't get over the power and heartfelt emotions brought forth by this poem. Definitely a strong favorite of mine. I will save it and read it often. Yours in Christ always, Sam Hyde

Tempestlady

02/04/2014

Your always so complimentary and kind. hope all is well with you and yours, and pray for you a pain free moment.

GentleT commented on The Wind of Death

06-13-2013

This poem reminds me of all the natural disasters of the past few years. The deviation, grief of so many. It rains on the just and unjust alike. Fine penning!

Tempestlady

08/05/2013

Thanks that was what i had in mind to when i wrote it.

TREVON commented on The Wind of Death

12-13-2011

I love the words you used it brought vivid life to your poem.

Tempestlady

01/13/2012

I was hoping for just such a result. Thanks so much, feel free to read and rate my work anytime, and let me know when you post and i will do the same for you........write on............Tlady

ayyan commented on The Wind of Death

09-23-2011

wonderful writing of this good poem, which has wings to fkly into my soul dear poem. very fine words and imgination on death

Tempestlady

09/28/2011

Thank you Ayyan, as always your comments are generous and most flattering. Hope your well. Tlady

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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