the wind of sorrow

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    the wind of sorrow

    the wind of sorrow chills my soul
    across my heart the wind blows cold
    inside my chest a winters bane
    a desolate frozen plain


    across my soul the whipping wind
    my fragile heart fractures again
    a frozen tundra that i bear
    to the coldest winter does not compare


    the weight of it all crashes down
    frozen pain screams out loud
    my tortured soul weighted with lead
    feelings of sorrow pain and dread


    cicles of ice with razor tips
    form on the memories i cant forget
    into my thoughts the sorrow drips
    as the freezing wind whips again

     
    the wind of sorrow within my soul
    from painful memories blows so cold
    the winters bane within my chest
    a frozen plain so desolate

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    LenaM commented on the wind of sorrow

    11-16-2010

    Intense ! this my favorite verse in this piece ( cicles of ice with razor tips form on the memories i cant forget into my thoughts the sorrow drips as the freezing wind whips again) I'm at a loss to adequately describe what this stirred in me forgive me for being nearly dumbstruck

    Dano

    11/17/2010

    dumbstruck... not sure if i have ever left anyone dumbstruck before

    inkmaster commented on the wind of sorrow

    10-03-2010

    this rocks d bravo your flow is great ...love the twisted thought put into the verse.......Inkmaster

    Dano

    10/06/2010

    thanks ink

    JadedJezzabel commented on the wind of sorrow

    09-18-2010

    love the metaphoric pulse of this.....check out my poem " Still " it's similar in nature to this.

    Dano

    09/18/2010

    thank you for your compliment

    am2anangel commented on the wind of sorrow

    09-16-2010

    Another great write your rhyme and style are excellent. very vivid imagery. well done. -Tonya

    Dano

    09/18/2010

    thank you tonya

    ApaqRasgirl commented on the wind of sorrow

    09-15-2010

    wow, that was wonderful dear, so much passion in this piece..I loved the connection of your emotions to nature with the wind and ice.....this flowed so well and with perfection was your rhymes and metaphors...........fantastic read my friend........love asha

    Dano

    09/15/2010

    thanks for your kind words asha

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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