the world in grey

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the world in grey

opened my eyes and saw the world in grey
it seems the sky opened up today
the rains fell down and drenched my face
and filled my heart with much disdain


      i dont look forward to the day today
      i really wish the grey would go away
      at least for now its here to stay
      but i really wish the grey would go away


closed my eyes and saw the world at play
in my mind the sun shines today
beaming down it warms my face
and takes me to a better place

 
      not dealing well with the day today
      wishing for the grey to go away
      i want the sunshine here to stay
      but all i see is this dreadful grey


opened my eyes and saw the world in grey
across the sky the colors fade
my tearful sighs drenched in pain
my skin awash from falling rain


      with open eyes i face the day
      and try to stare past the growing grey
      tomorrow will be a better day
      if the the grey of today just goes away
  


 


 

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paxtruth commented on the world in grey

08-16-2010

Well, Dano, I'm not laughing. I've never been depressed and hope to God I never have to experience it. I do get down though and cynical too. I like the cynical part, the part that sees this world for what it really is. I can't imagine what my life would be like now if God hadn't pulled me out by my bootstraps. Check out my poen "Without Your Love". I'm glad you have poetry as an outlet; it does help.

Dano

08/17/2010

this was not meant to make you laugh... the world appears without color for me sometimes and the grey overwhelmes everything else... i just write what i see and how i feel

SavVySam commented on the world in grey

07-28-2010

These feelings must be going around...lol I just commented on inkmaster's that I had done one along these lines too...This one is finely done by you!;)

Dano

07/29/2010

thanks so much sam

inkmaster commented on the world in grey

07-19-2010

Actually looked out the window and saw no color.....nice write enjoyed it,,,,,,Inkmaster

Dano

07/29/2010

thanks for commenting ink... stay well

lunamarie commented on the world in grey

07-19-2010

wow ... and I thought I was the only person with "grey" poems ... haha ............ Luna

Dano

07/29/2010

thanks for stopping by luna

MindNumbing commented on the world in grey

07-19-2010

I love the kind of writes that can be pulled apart and read in different layers. Your indentions of every other stanza indicate to me that this was done be design and not coincidence, and it's brilliant! The world may be grey today... but we always have tomorrow to look forward to. Let the rains fall, we can always stay in ;) ♥

Dano

07/29/2010

thanks hon

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Dano’s Poems (150)

Title Comments
Title Comments
from an angels view 19
searching the darkness 10
a letter from santa 14
thanksgiving (acrostic) 12
the depth of... 11
ive wished 7
absentee 12
this is... 13
a journey into the dark 7
the cold of november 14
your voice 12
the yin to the yang 14
twisted 9
autumn 14
i think it happened again 11
luna~tic 19
the darkness 13
a blinding eclipse 16
the universe... 18
the wind of sorrow 14
my sorrow weeps 16
where but the dark... 12
immortal kiss 47
in a darkened room 17
our mother 7
within these flames 12
nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock 7
behind wrought iron bars 25
what i write (part 2) 8
today 17
the world in grey 6
the reality of... 5
in the shadow of a mountain 6
nothing will ever be the same 10
of cemetary dreams (and nightmare scapes) 12
next to a bed... 18
but... 15
at a funeral 12
seventeen (acrostic) 11
the fortunate one(s) 7
what did i do... 24
ashes to dust 45
dancing in the moonlight 14
disempowering the pain 14
the butterfly 10
what i write 14
sorry (i killed the after glow) 11
the humidity rises (an erotic tale) 9
pieces of light 8
the sad pumpkin &... 9
my face 12
for a long time... 14
(an explination of) distractions 6
tell me... 6
the charelston cookie tin 9
silent self destruction 8
exposed 13
the means of the day (a true valentines poem) 2
a poem about nothing... 8
blood bleeds black 7
dissecting myself 3
i will be just fine 3
the stacking of bricks 3
the complexities of depression... 4
spirits & ghosts 3
**random chaos** 2
bloodlust 3
...somethings missing... 2
15 years... 3
beauty sleeps entombed (parts 1 & 2) 3
**untitled** 2
the overstuffed closet 3
the candy dish 2
anxiety speaks 2
**untitled** 2
myself and the light 6
the fog 2
fire and tears 3
cerebral meltdown 3
sometimes i wish... 1
drawing strength from a starr... 2
disappointmen
t...
1
**untitled** 1
the flower garden 3
nature... 1
reaching out 2
the dark and the light... 1
the insistent demon 2
sorry... 3
forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2) 2
im so sorry... 3
**no title... just random thoughts** 1
to eternity... 2
winter wind whips... 1
tired 2
lucid dream 1
the rains came... 2
the mourning light 1
another jagged pill 1
i just cant... 1
entitlement?!
?!?
1
entitlement!!
!!
1
burning within 4
inside of me 1
projected pain 1
the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
panic 2
the mourning fog 1
when the fires burn 1
through the night 1
shadow casts 0
a mournful rain 1
i cant protect me 2
my comfort place 0
an echo shifts 1
the monster 2
welcome to my life 0
the past is alive... 1
... 1
standing on the edge 2
my smile... 1
anxiety 2
my reality 0
another view... 0
untitled... 0
jagged pill 2
in the dark 1
what to do 1
how can i... 1
life... 3
a crust of pain 1
keeping me weak... 2
my dark world 3
another night of wondering 2
in the attic 4
i hold most dear 2
the me inside of me 2
another day 1
dreamed in a dream 2
a year in the life (dealing with death) 1
i look... 1
where my secrets are kept 1
a mouthful of words 2
i will not fear (when my eyes are blind) 2
i am aware (i'm already dead) 7
standing in the silence of my own shadow... 3
a blinding dark 1
growing pain 3
the longest of nights 5
... 7