The Worst Day

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    This is for my daughter Nicky who is dead six years now still miss her so much

    The Worst Day

    The worst day of my life 
    There cant be any other
    The day that she died 
    And left me her  mother

    It was a day that I cant forget
    Its been six years now
    And I remember it yet
    You came to my home

    You got to my door
    You collapsed in my arms
    And fell to the floor
    The last words I said

    Was you look like a ghost
    You died in my arms 
    Now I miss you the most
    you left behind two little one

    A beautiful daughter and a we son
    I didn't say I love please don't go
    The day that you died we didn't know
    It was the last time that we,ed ever see

    Our beautiful daughter who gone into eternity

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    honeypot commented on The Worst Day

    01-04-2011

    Thanks Broken Heart I am trying to live with it as best I can and the writing helps me so much.I put my soul out on to the paper like most of us poets on this site .Thanks again Honeypot
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on The Worst Day

    01-04-2011

    I am so sorry for your loss. OMG that would be something terrible to live with. Life doesn't always give us the chance to say goodbye.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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