The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment..........
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  • Altair
  • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

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I wanted to write something new.....that is alll =)

The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

In the calming of the storm, shows my fruitive nature
breathing twilight endeavors I smile
upon my third eye lies the monocle fixture
magnifying epic transcendent wiles.
As the story goes, tell a tale in leisure
while relaxed I find pause in condescending styles
speaking from my thought, I recalled the fever
now moving forth as the present compiles....

Within this poem, one will see newness
an open invitation to growth my mind suffices
upon bliss lies the tainted travels of ignorance
said line is welcomed in contradicting light.
My universe elopes with the stars manifest
the diamonds it mimics upon the cold ice
my planet in the center of circular conquest
my body supposed erect, really lies supine.

Please don't fault me in moving past life
the gesture is completed in my waking sleep
contrite impressions I need not, concise
fortunate happenstance of my deep personality.
Looking in the mirror, a tree of great height
reflecting contour branches unseen
the metaphor ignites my relative disguise
reality to me is my soul's obliquity....

I speak in tones of cadence for my shadow
its existence in it's silhouette prime comforts me
in all my walks in life it was sure to follow
in varied angles of perception to my feet.
Within my dreaming of dark plane's tomorrow
opposites take affect, as I lie, my shadow speaks
all my sorrows absorb into it's body's hollow
a welcomed phenomenon in my noumenal feat....

Such awe-inspiring revelations in each breath
every finger tap shows my converse formality
my mind still empties all foreseen steps
creating a plethora of words that forms me.
Follow me on this journey, a resourceful test
gather truth beyond your mind, like leaves to trees
for you it may be like cantankerous death
but for me, every line is such as parting seas.

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nature commented on The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

06-18-2018

You have returned my friend! And have shook the landscape in true Lynx fashion and allure. Well done with this piece, but as usual you knock it out the park.

ApaqRasgirl commented on The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

10-22-2010

Wow, my friend that was deep, I loved the metaphors you used in this piece, anyone reading this would certainly be compelled to stay glued to the page to seek out each word used in this poem. You are an amazing writer dear, these are some of the best pieces I have read, and I can't believe you have not one a contest, especially with this one, it would be so well earned, from all the thought and feeling you have poured out in every word of this write.........fantastic dear,,,,,,now you have captured my attention and I will be on the alert for more new posts from you my dear friend. I am so sorry that I have missed these wonderful pieces of your until now.......but rest assured this reader will seek you out..........Bravo...........love asha

Altair

10/22/2010

Asha it is very welcoming reading your comments on my expressions....such delight I feel in reading them...Thank you So very much...;-)

Olan01 commented on The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

10-22-2010

You had me hooked at "upon my third eye lies the monocle fixture" so I was compelled to read more..., this is a beautifully written poem, simply sublime. Olan

Altair

10/22/2010

Thank you very much olan.

knight4696 commented on The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

09-19-2010

Altair .. Great job once again from the metaphorical rhyming master. I love the fact that you are able to convey such meaningful works while making us ponder and reflect within ourselves .. Another awesome piece! :) Ken

Altair

09/21/2010

Thanks my friend...always a pleasure to be appreciated

ginga commented on The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment...........

09-12-2010

ALtair, Spellbinding, an epiphany of imagery and stimulation...in grand style. ginga

Altair

09/13/2010

Awwww ginga You are so awesome ty ty for the comment dear..

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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