The Wrong

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    The Wrong

    The pain...
    it shows as a tear trickles down my nose.
    I dont want to let go.
    i want you here.
    Your arms around me and your wispers in my ear.
    No one understands the way i feel.
    There are feelings i dont reveal.
    They want me to have the best, but the best for me is what i want.
    What i deserve is happiness.
    Which i only have with your fingers in my hair and my head on your chest.
    They only see your wrong but what they dont see is that you've loved me all along.

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    bastidastribe7 commented on The Wrong

    04-26-2009

    i liked this piece, im sure many can relate, you express yourself well while keeping your message concise, good job.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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