The Year You Came To Me

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The Year You Came To Me

You are so beautiful, my love
I’ve heard the winds all day
saying stardust’s falling from the sky.
And you are making it happen.
Shall I yell my soul mate, love?

 
Darling, my, would be husband, you.
How I respect and treasure you true.
You know who is the runner in the skies,
Yet, I know not where heartache lies.
But it’s you who never says goodbye.

And all these years, I wait for you
doth time so quickly flies, it’s true
Your meek, kind and very blue eyes
Never stop planning, nor giving, no lies.

I despise myself, when I am lonely
Wanting more from you only.
Our unity, un-build by hands
made us, the one, the two, it’s true
It’s glorious, the two, me and you.

How shall I help to right the wrong?
That which keeps us separated, or
trying to keep us farther and farther apart.
When you are the joy that feds my heart.


We shall sing again the song you sung

One night, seemly so long ago,
into the Stratosphere three years no more,
the year you came to me or rather,
I to you out to you my love with eyes so blue.



By CatsMeow ©2011. All rights reserved.

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Year You Came To Me

04-27-2011

A very beautiful and fluid poem. It expresses eloquently all the love you have inside. Bravo!........E

CatsMeow

05/15/2011

Thank you for your beautiful comments. I have been too busy to write lately! Thanks for reading my works.

StandingBear commented on The Year You Came To Me

03-04-2011

Yes, finally a beautifully written love poem for the ages. Flowing so free and smooth, it's as if i'm sitting beside a calm running brook under a willow tree.

cousinsoren commented on The Year You Came To Me

03-03-2011

A love poem with a difference, Musicality appealung, Dicrtion- effective us of monosyllbics and disyllabics and rhymes where used, PLease correct grammar of this line."Doth time so quickly flies" ought to be "doth time so quickly fly, it's true. .

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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