Theater of Dreams

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    Theater of Dreams

    Above these sculptured hills rise
    Dazzling white clouds sail the sky
    Meandering breeze strides 'cross gorges of green
    With fragrant sweet spices from sources unseen

    Ascending, unending: commanding our eyes
    Beholding their glory raptured on high

    Be there an Architect of vapors design
    Who masters order,  from course to fine
    Radiates refracted, Autographed Light
    Guiding the billow and nimbus aright?

    Achromatic, brilliant mist gleams
    Clouds converging, ever emerging
    Rest o’er this valley: Theater of Dreams

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    jademelissa74 commented on Theater of Dreams

    01-26-2010

    At face value, this piece is absolutely incredible. The rhyme, the flow and content are amazing. Metaphorically speaking, it simply opens avenues to discussions about the wonders from up above. You always seem to send your message forth with one intention and if I may, that is to reach the reader's mental state upon completion of reading it, not just to receive a comment but to really reach within. Great write.
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    Marsink

    01/26/2010

    This has been one of my favorite pices to write. If one cannot look at creation and see the signature of a loving, intelligent God, then what are we doing here? I am hopeful to impart some facet of His character in my work. I am glad of your kind words and thank you!

    kmooney commented on Theater of Dreams

    01-25-2010

    I liked this a lot. Concise and very thought provoking. The clouds can be God's cavass sometimes. Subtle ways he finds to communicate with us. Its only those that take the time to look and listen that really, ultimately, hear. Thanks for sharing... Kevin
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    Marsink

    01/25/2010

    I am truly conviced of that very truth, that His Creation points to His awesome power of loving and wise design. Thankyou for your support of generous compliments, Kevin!

    SavVySam commented on Theater of Dreams

    01-24-2010

    The play of light and words woven throughout this piece give it a very dreamy feel! Restful read..Thanks
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    Marsink

    01/24/2010

    Thank you, Sam! It's a good thing to have a good read from a good girl. I am pleased to be of dream service.

    SavVySam

    01/24/2010

    lol Thanks Marck!

    Rhymer commented on Theater of Dreams

    01-23-2010

    Your poetry never fails to inspire images to dance across my mind. Excellent write 10 from me.
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    Marsink

    01/23/2010

    Rhymer, you're one to write. I am very pleased to see these words of encouragement. (Now I can write another day or two, just from the fuel you've given, here) THANK YOU

    angel2 commented on Theater of Dreams

    01-23-2010

    msrsink~ what a reality of thoughts. its just like that up there from the back seat of an airplane. i liked the poem a lot
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    Marsink

    01/23/2010

    thank you, A12, I do concur, that I got every ounce of meaning I could out of this in few stanzas. Very appreciative of your glowing appraisal

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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