These Scares

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This poem is based up on a time in life when i was slittin the rist to ease some pain from with in but it really didnt work out 4 me it just made me more mad...so in stead i tryed toher things and now im still here to tell about it..as an example hope u enjoy it

These Scares

The scares
They were placed on my risk
who did it
  - ME -
because I knew I could
these scares didn't bring pain,
     pain brought these scares,

The scares
  These scares showed people I'm weird,crazy,and different
thought I was tryin to kill myself - was I ? ...
NO -  not so I was mad, so I couldnt feel it ..

These scares showed that I knew what had
happened because it was me but everyone else
hadn't hurd just yet where these scares
came from, who did it .. why ?.. did it hurt ? ...

 scares that are on my risk you can see
scares that are on my heart you can't see

Theses scares show that I've been through some thing

 I had to go through a fight
to make it through but theses scares
also say I made it....

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daniel081180 commented on These Scares

05-31-2012

that is very thought provoking and beautiful. It shows that people can see the scars on the outside but what about the ones that people can't see. they are the scars who make us who we are. You are such a beautiful person inside and out. I love you for you my love...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

HiddenAngel’s Poems (33)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Can't Let Go 2
Yur Love 1
Hanging Fire 1
These Scares 2
" Seeking For Freedom in Death" 1
Struggles of Life 0
Not Perfect 1
No Mercy 0
P.R.M *Please Rescue Me 3
Real Life - disfuncional 0
Being Near You !! 0
Loving You 1
O'So Far ** Daniel 1
Hate xx 2
* This Pain * 0
I Refuse 0
For ME "never again".. 0
She died 0
Ask Me Valentine 0
Why ME !! 1
People Hate 1
To Be Born 0
Mother Why 0
Incomplete 1
SLICED 0
No Freedom 0
Glass Mirror 1
Because of yu.. I've Learned to hate Me 1
Daddy's lil Gurl 1
Please Dad 1
Hanging Fire 1
Every thing 1
A Word of Wisdom !! 1