This Feeling

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    This Feeling
    Everyone knows about this feeling
    Sitting there wiggling around
    Like if they had ants in their pants
    Trying not to let loose, what a mess
    Wiggling there, legs held tight together
    Oh…this feeling is one I hate
    As I stand, yet wiggling even more
    For if I were to take a step I would loss control
    I stand there for a few minutes, seems like forever
    I think it is safe to take a step, I better move fast
    I wiggle my way up the steps
    A few more to go, got to stop for here it comes again
    This feeling drives me crazy, why does it have to be so far away
    I am on the move again, not to many steps more and ill be there
    At the top, around the corner I see comfort
    As I pull my pants down, thinking how close I was
    I sit down just in time, releasing the pressure
    Wow……I feel like I can dance all night
    With the pressure finally gone, a wipe and go on my way
    Till the next day I will wiggle my way
    Wiggle to the top to release this pressure on my bladder
    Thank god I didn’t piss myself today

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    NayInLove commented on This Feeling

    03-20-2009

    i can definetly relate!
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    Pattycake commented on This Feeling

    03-20-2009

    Very great poem! smile
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    CopperTop327 commented on This Feeling

    03-19-2009

    lol i know this feeling. never could have put it that way though. nice job. lol
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    brandon commented on This Feeling

    03-18-2009

    sounds like jamie everytime she coughs she almost pisses her self
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    keithrberryjr commented on This Feeling

    03-18-2009

    great poem.I enjoyed it.
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