This Hill I stumble upon...

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    This Hill I stumble upon...

    This hill I stumble upon,
    The stars at night I wish on.
    Looking below in the valley,
    Nature is what i hear and see.
    I cuddle up to a huge oak tree,
    The squirrels, deer, and frogs are all around.
    A pack of wolves surround me, Very, Very hungry...
    But out comes a big black bear to save me...
    An angel in disquise because God ain't ready for me,
    So that's my sign that God is not blind.
    He sees and he knows what I deal with,
    And he will take care of all this Injustice. 
    I fear him because I am a sinner and I'm supposed to,
    But i love him and i know now he truly loves me too.
    This hill I stumble upon is now ground with rocks I walk on...

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    Coltsfan777 commented on This Hill I stumble upon...

    03-09-2011

    You sure have a lot of emotions that you pour into each write. I really like the last few lines of this poem. Very powerful and true. Also sorry I mistakened you for a man!! You have a very original writing style. You outta check out my twin brothers poetry if you haven't already. winterkou is his username.

    Worthless

    03/22/2011

    Yeah i have been friends with him for awhile. I really wish i could be on here more.. It's just hard not havig a he or kowing where I'm going to be from day to day. I try every chance i get to read your guys poems and comment as you do with mine. bepatient and I will do my best. PlusI got more to submit.. Mybe when I get back at the yard if ever.. I'm stucki Joplin Missouri waiing on my truck to get fixed..

    julieannetx commented on This Hill I stumble upon...

    10-08-2010

    I like this poem. I like it so much better than "I wanna" Here I see a man of strength who knows there will be adversity but if God's not ready for him, he's just going to have to keep on riding that long dusty trail knowing God will take care of things!

    julieannetx

    10/08/2010

    Hey! Please accept my apology! "Worthless" just sounds like a man's name....but after reading Girly Girl I realized you are a woman. My comment above still stands with a gender change!

    Worthless

    10/22/2010

    That's ok, all the men i know say i'm more of a man then they are.. Ha, Ha. Hell, these day's it seems as if the tables are turned because alot of men a pussy's. Thanks for reading..

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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    Unscrambled word pool... 0
    Here we go again.... 1
    Call me please???? 0
    Your dancing a path to my heart... 0
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    Words... 0
    A game of hide and seek... 2
    Last Breath 0
    Justice system, My A$$.... 1
    Satans slave 0
    Dear Daughter, My Sweet Princess... 0
    Is there really hope??? 1
    Dear Heavenly Father.... 0
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    Humans.. 1
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    Deathly Pissed... 0
    Life 2
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    March 27... 1
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    Opening Day... 1
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    A new lust, not love... 1
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    God is Here 2
    Worthless 4