This Hurt

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

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I wrote this for my daughter because of all the stuff her Aunt did to her she was left feelin like her only excape was to try and kill herself.

This Hurt

Out of breath,
out of words,
I'm to horse to scream.
You yell at me,
you tell me I'm worthless,
after you made me
the promis you'd never,
never hurt me the
way you did in 2009.
Now I'm out of breath
and I'm out of words,
with tears running
down my cheeks,
my heart is racing
beating way to fast
the doctors start to ask,
now honey what did you take?
I try to speak
but no sound comes out.
My parents rush to my side,
my mom is crying
and my daddy looks so scared.
They ask me why
I wanted to die so bad,
I finally manage to say
it was the only way I
could excape,
I needed to get away
from all this hurt.

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Crush commented on This Hurt

07-24-2012

very sad times. i just got through cancer , so far so good. if you need to talk, McGillionaire@yahoo.com

wiskeygirl5090

03/09/2013

Wow I'm very sorry to hear that you have cancer what kind is it if you dont mind me asking?

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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