This is it

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Based on an event that happened tonight. I wanted to vent out my energy and emotions about it...... By far my darkest poem yet.

This is it

Thought unclear, my heart is broken
she fucked around on me
Life is dark, there is no good
I should have already known

Confusion is here, there is no will
I am on my own
I now must face, this one dark fact
that there must not be a God

This is it, I'm going over
My heart is fading away
Who I am, and who I was
we are not the same

I'm like a ship, without a dock
Alone in the vast sea
I'm never found, I am lost
never to be seen

You have won, I've given up
Just let me rot away
My body smells, I decompose
My soul goes away with it

Hate and anger, is all I have
nothing makes me cry
I hate you, for what you did!
I just want to die

You were special, unlike her
she was just a friend
I never fucked around on you
All I loved was you

I say hi, you say I'm pregnant
I know it isn't mine
We never fucked, but you sure did
I hope you fucking die!

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Rygar commented on This is it

10-06-2009

amazingly sad, angry and sweet, bears witness to feeling that of defeat. ire and rage, compassion is gone, this poem is worthy of being in song. well done venom.

SuperChick76 commented on This is it

10-06-2009

Ouch. That's the first thing I thought of when I read that. Beautifully written, but then again, some of the best work comes from the worst experiences, eh? But, cest la vi, life goes on. Wonderful job with the poem, though. You're one of my favorite poets on here, actually. Beautiful work.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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