this kind of sickness

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    this kind of sickness

    the twisted knots in the bottom of my stomach
    the feeling of deep misery latching on to my broken heart
    the ache like i got the wrong kind of flu
    a spoiled feeling that just didnt connect
    these endless tears u have given me
    storming down like a loose river
    i cant think straight
    my mind all tormented
    smothering this cricked heart of mine
    this tainted feeling u have given me
    i shed more then fear
    no one is here
    no one is here
    shallow as my coffin as i see n blurs
    the silence befriends me again today
    your echos are gone
    here i stand not yet amused
    u ripped me n parts
    loving just u
    never looked back
    u were the fame
    but now picking up the peices
    u have just disembled in veighn

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    Drivingczar commented on this kind of sickness

    04-18-2009

    Another great write! Keep on keepin' on!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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