This love


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what a wonderful thing it is to be in love!

This love

In your arms,

And in this place,

Our love melts away

All concepts of time and space.

The way you look into my eyes,

It’s like you are gazing into the clear blue skies

I smile and wonder what I have done

To be this lucky,

To be the chosen one.

I must have stunned and mystified,

All those emotions that you tried to hide

Being with you I have found myself

and so much more,

I remember this every time you hold me,

Every time you walk through my door,

You are my sun, my shining star, my everything,

Yes, that is what you are.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

UnbreakableLove’s Poems (22)

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This love 0
FindinG Peace 0
hearts 0
Lonely 0
processing 0
stillness 1
Waiting 1
Strange 1
Happy? 1
Living Lies (Part 2) 0
Living Lies 0
Never Again 1
Walking Away 0
Come Back 1
You and I 0
unreal 0
I hate you 1
So Close 0
Stay Away 1
Quietness 0
what we don't say 3
Somewhere In-between 1