This Time

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    • blackfootlady
    • Friends Gather in hope.It's Faith that leads them to Destiny!

    This Time

     I desire you not for what you have;but for who you are.Threw the shutters of my windows I can still see Hope...Even thou hindered by despair I will stand strong in faith.I will no longer ponder in misery.For One day I too will retire from this earth.You will not see me exit from life by ones hands.Yet I will rise above and look back at you one last time.I will exit with no worldly possessions.The heavenly kingdom will love my spirit more for lesser and that will be my strength..thus the Essence of life learned should be love.Reach inside your rose gardens and fear not the thorn.The thorn may be the one crown of hope that flourishes the stems to your faith.As the rose blooms and open remember me all eternity.The center is the heart you cannot own because the soul goes unseen and exist forever more... For fear is the begotten threat that devoured our love and they will not exist together this time.Once more if this is not learned;the essence of life is love.

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    loneehorse commented on This Time

    12-12-2009

    I love the way you attrack the attention of your writers,Good Job,well done.
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    blackfootlady

    12/13/2009

    I wish I knew what to say...TY.God Bless,Churv

    Lolee commented on This Time

    12-11-2009

    Good job with this, whistful, and simplistic. ............ten.............
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    blackfootlady

    12/11/2009

    Oh wow ,ty. you know lolee I'm reading excellent poetry from everyone tonight.Everyone even you are doing much better writting. Isee inprovements everywhere.You keep up the good work too.Ty for your comment.Itry not to write above peoples heads.Churv

    Hampton commented on This Time

    12-07-2009

    Nicely done. Somewhat ethereal in its expression. wording and flow,
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    blackfootlady

    12/13/2009

    Ty Hampton,I really appreciate all the posetive comments i'm recieving.Churv

    MrGee commented on This Time

    12-05-2009

    EXCELLENT! You paint such a good picture inthe mind of the reader. I especially was enamoured to the line that reads- ...thus the essence of life learned should be love. Very poetic. One comment Threw the shutters of the window shud perhaps read Throught the shutters... ? However, be as it may I still rate this poem a 10
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    blackfootlady

    12/05/2009

    Why ty for critiquing my poem in such a highly rated comment and score.I'm grateful to have a reader and writer like you looking at my work,ty.

    icu2 commented on This Time

    12-04-2009

    This is so beautiful. Easy to understand what you are trying to say. Very nice job.
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    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    Ty icu2,You might like my site. theres a few that i think are better than this one.I saw Him was written for my granson and grandaughter.If i were poor? is different too I hope to see you back here browsing ,ty.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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