"this trash barrel is still on fire"

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    Old house keeper at work.. is such a sweet heart... complains all the time but that ok..

    "this trash barrel is still on fire"

    "This trash barrel is still on fire"

     Pops’ says!

    77 year house keeper

    I asked him about his bruise on his lip

    "This trash barrel is still on fire"

    He says!

    Snow on the rooftop

    Chimneys smoking'

    Geriatrics is the best workers

    Hard dedicated

    They know the value of a hard days pay

    Cranky ole majority

    Sweet ole dude

    Says if it doesn't rhyme it’s not for Keim.

    Speaking of my poem I wrote about him.

    Ole well ha

     

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    SuSpence commented on "this trash barrel is still on fire"

    06-11-2010

    Haha, its hard to get a laugh out of me at 6:30 am, but you did it blu lol, I really liked this one. Reads as a dry sense of humour, I almost pictured Steven Wright telling this story which made it even funnier for me Haha. Thanks for the laugh. ~Spence

    bluskyinthenite

    06/11/2010

    Thank you... I know it doesnt rhyme but i wrote it for the sweet ole house keeper at work... such a dedicated employee... so much of our older majority have to work in they're retirerment years to make it thew. W Which is sad... retirement. bluecrossblueshield............

    knight4696 commented on "this trash barrel is still on fire"

    06-08-2010

    Blue - nothing like penning the age old saying .. There may be snow on the roof .. but there's still a fire in the furnace. lol! Nice one! :) Ken

    mustascheman commented on "this trash barrel is still on fire"

    06-08-2010

    A most decidedly different poem. No real flow, no real rhyme. But all the same it works and works well for you. I couldn't write like this even if I tried. I'm just too wordy I guess. To be honest, I'm not even sure I understand this but by the barnacle it sure sounds cool when read out loud!

    bluskyinthenite

    06/08/2010

    Its about an old dude at work... Yeah i no it doesnt rhyme. but i told the house keeper i would write about him.. so i did.. that you so very much for reading.... Mass Majority are older people... that find it a need to keep working through the retirerment years... sad to say. thanks again

    Teardrops commented on "this trash barrel is still on fire"

    06-07-2010

    i like this we all have a certain way to express love so do your thing Marie

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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