This Woman, Beautiful Woman

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    This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    I have a story to tell about this woman whose in my thoughts to be
    All my life I been looking for woman like this to appeal to me...
    This is my story, i should tell it differently from the heart that smile,
    that maybe this could turn into love that lasts for more than a mile...
    This woman, her story brings her my way because of her past,
    hearts broken but feelings mended, hoping my love here to last...
    She speaks of pain, broken love, everything short of broken bones,
    holding up her head willing to try me, the past now stepping stones...
    her and her child victims, not asking to be hated but just wanting love,
    all she ever wanted was to be happy and just be thought of...
    I write this because of her inspiration, she never gave up or gave in,
    deep down all I know that she ask to be in a love where she can win...
    I felt her in a different way, saw her in a different sight, there she be,
    now i'm feeling that way and to keep her happy is all that of me...
    This poem I write, feelings I feel, something deep and from the heart,
    May we be together being happy and may no-one tear us apart..........
    ..........Amen !!!!!
    "In Memory of Treeci" born September 1, 1970
    asleep December 19, 1987

    Edward Orlando Griffin

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    OddOneOut commented on This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    11-23-2009

    I apologize for your lost. This is a very lovely poem. You have a way with words, you captured me from the very beginning and there wasnt a dull moment anywhere within it. You made me feel the pain of which you wrote, but then also made me feel the inspiration to find my true love...and hold on with everything.

    deedeemcgee commented on This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    09-06-2009

    There are no words ro say except she must have been a heck of a girl. Your poem was great in every way.

    1990lh commented on This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    08-06-2009

    one word beautiful....................................

    JLove commented on This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    07-21-2009

    this is beautiful. it reminds me of my best friend whom searched for love. finally she found it. finally she tasted love. it was taken from her for reasons unknown and may she r.i.p.

    shontel commented on This Woman, Beautiful Woman

    06-08-2009

    Very moving and deep. You spoke of a true love and admiration for her. Im sorry for your loss........

    edgee

    06/10/2009

    shontel, thank you for your comment...very appreciative....

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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