this ( for annie )

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    this ( for annie )



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    heavy words thrown around a room
    and there is no better ricochet
    than "love"

    lights flash and feeling splash with true identity
    once futile dealings are now robust and plenty
    she is power and passion
    i am snatched to attention by her voice
    and massaged in the words from her world
    my heart aches it's throbbing beat
    and all songs are now complete
    stripped am i of flesh that i would give to her
    if she grew cold
    deprived am i of comforts
    if her life needed gold
    broken are my bones if she needed defending

    i love her






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    mony commented on this ( for annie )

    01-02-2011

    Beautiful poem.... it has so much texture and feeling.. I loved it..
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    Phission

    01/11/2011

    thank you so much for your time and attention ....i will return to read more of your work as well.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on this ( for annie )

    12-24-2010

    I like the way you think. The wording in this one is amazing. I had to read it over again and roll the words slowly along my tongue. Fave line ' My heart aches it's throbbing beat and all songs are now complete. Excellent write..........E
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    Phission

    12/30/2010

    thank you for you time and attention to my word.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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