THORS HAMMER

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    THORS HAMMER

    THOR'S HAMMER
    {Dori Wheeler © 28sept09}

    As I listen to the rain pound
    Coming through the tattered autumn leaves
    Splashing as it hit's the sodden ground

    The lightning's flashing
    Lighting up the tomb colored sky
    Thunder's crashing

    Crashing loud like Thor is pissed
    Pounding his hammer
    Like he's never missed

    Splashing, illuminating, pounding
    Makes my senses raw
    Effervenscence to my surrounding

    Hairs on my body stand on end
    As the electricity pulsates through me
    My juices flowing, making me transcend

    I've never wanted you more then at this moment in time
    Thrusting like the swing of Thor's hammer
    I engulf you like it's a friggen crime

    My bosom taught and heaving
    Nipples like hardened rose buds
    Sweat is dripping, bodies cleaving

    All at once our bodies rumble just like thunder
    Trembling like the ground that was hit by lightning
    One last thrust takes us over the edge, a beautiful wonder

    I lie with you for a short while
    Reminiscent of days gone by
    Our clothes torn off, tossed into a pile

    Slowly I dress without one word
    You ask when you'll see me again, can you call?
    I strut out the door, like I never heard!

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    eddie14 commented on THORS HAMMER

    12-30-2010

    wow i like it very intence provocitive i imaging making awesome love and the greatnes of it untill the run for the door lol Great writing

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    THORS HAMMER 2
    THE HOUSE ON THE HILL 1
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    "THE UPCOMING NIGHT" 2
    "TODAY I HONOR YOU!" 0
    "MY EARTH, MY MOTHER" 0
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    "HE MADE IT FEEL LIKE HOME" 0
    "WITHOUT ANY REGRETS" 0
    "THAT KISS" 0
    "DIRE STRAITS" 0
    "YOU CAN'T STEAL TIME" 0
    "PRIDE AND EGO" 0
    "CONFUSED" 0
    "A SHOVEL FULL" 0
    "COMFORT AND JOY" 0
    "IF I FALL" 0
    'RAIN IS FOR COUPLES" 1
    ALONE 0
    TORN 1
    TWISTED FATE 0
    "HOW TO GET A RING" 0
    "IF A TREE COULD TALK" 2
    "THE DAILY RITUAL" 0
    "DISAPPEAR" 0
    "OUR SECRET SIGNAL" 0
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    "THE HEAT" 1
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    "I JUST ASSUMED" 0
    "A DEATH IN THE FAMILY" 0
    "MY MOTHER'S VOICE" 0
    "PANDORA'S BOX" 0
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    "FOREVER ON HIS ARM" 1
    POSTCARD FROM LOVE 0
    "SHE LOVED RED ROSES" 2
    "A THIEF IN THE NIGHT" 1
    "ONE LAST CALL" 0
    "MIND GAMES" 0
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    "NIGHTMARES IN THE SANITARIUM" 1
    "THE KEY TO HAPPINESS" 0
    "FREEDOM" 3
    "LOVE YOUR NEIGHBOR" 2
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