thoughts and concepts

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    thoughts and concepts

    Man's thoughts has always plagued his soul, concepts perpetuated by false truths, imaginary plans becoming lost goals.

    No one knows who really has control. What is my God's name? What is your God's name? Do you even have a God? Or is it all just a bunch of old stories grandpa told............For the record I do believe!

    Why is the path to darkness illuminated, and yet the path to enlightenment darkend? By my own choice have I struggled to obtain true wisdom, only to find myself with more questions to be answered.

    You never stop to smell the flowers or even look up into the sky, overworked bodies and tired minds, causes our reality to fade and die.

    Let's be honest for a second. I I still have a series of unanswered questions, circling around inside my head. Like a storm the clouds have darkend my judgement.

    Striving to correct the mistakes I've made, realizing my education has always come the hard way.

    Deception regaining control of my emotions. Unable to shake confusion as it closes in all around me.

    Fighting what seems to be a usless war. Who cares who's in charge, working together is all I'm for!

     

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    Mangus commented on thoughts and concepts

    07-16-2009

    A profoundly deep piece. I can tell that you were touched when you were writing it. It rings loudly through words . Thank you for sharing

    Chi commented on thoughts and concepts

    07-03-2009

    This poem has a great ending and a profound meaning ................you are a deep thinker...which is the tell tell sign of a wise man. enlightened on......Buddha in you comes forth! (smile) I give this poem a rating of 100. Chi.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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