Thoughts flow

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Thoughts flow

sitting in front of this pc i type,
 
letting my thoughts flow freely, as they come to life,
feels like i've lost the one thing that inspires me, truly,
the one thing that makes me feel to give, so freely.
you woke me up and made me pay attention,
asleep i was, not expecting affection,
there you were, eyes gleaming,
kind words flowing from your heart,just streaming.
where were you when i needed you?
to love me, to be true.
to give me such a gift, so undeserving, i feel,
your heart most precious, i can't believe its real,
but you held true, you showed me,
now i'm here again, alone, did you leave me?
now i'm coming on my own, where are you to receive me? 

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Phoenix9 commented on Thoughts flow

11-27-2010

sad with some hope, or not, or maybe inspiration is coming, so don't settle for less, but be cautiuos for the way things could go

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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