Thoughts for Friends

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    I just want to keep my comments and advices to friends here....for I know these words could not be repeated and might disappear to oblivion.

    These comments are also for me....strangely, I write it for someone when I know it is also for me. Its existence, I have no doubt, is within me....I just have to write them down......curse of a writer! Ha!

    Thoughts for Friends

    For JDGrant:
    I
    Everyone follows where the river flows...
    No one can resist its current
    No one knows where it goes....
    Only one Being knowledge is inherent
    Only one Being eternally knows!

    Be guided so your river shall not be strange,
    For in your heart & spirit-- love & peace shall remain!!!

    ~~for my friend, james...phoenixhope  8.6.09~~

    II
    Confused & holding your breath....gasping for air, you just wait for one to surface and reveal itself...then u can breathe again!
    I was told by a fellow poet that it is only when we're gasping for air, do we remember to breathe.(Lithiumblack)
    I said -- And it is only when we learn how to breathe that we learn how to live...
    May you sense its manifestation as it slowly reveals itself in your life... before it fades!

    ~~phoenixhope~~

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    DavidRayy commented on Thoughts for Friends

    08-07-2009

    nice poem for a friend. all I can do is read and take a deep breath. Ahhhh thats better, THANX!!
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    phoenixhope’s Poems (19)

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    My Peering Sun 5 03/15/2010
    A Corpse Amiss 9 10/30/2009
    Why Open My Eyes? 10 08/30/2009
    Thoughts for Friends 1 08/06/2009
    Two Sides Of A Silver Coin 1 07/16/2009
    The Promise of a Heavy Road 6 06/23/2009
    Fresh Dove of Light 2 06/04/2009
    Just Disappear 4 06/01/2009
    Numbed and Turned to Dust 5 05/25/2009
    OCEANS 12 06/17/2009
    Doomed For Life? 3 05/23/2009
    Ignored! 3 05/13/2009
    Free To Do What You Want 4 05/13/2009
    Dragging Torments 1 05/13/2009
    Devoured and Consumed! 2 05/27/2009
    Dejected! 2 05/09/2009
    Vision Of You 1 05/09/2009
    Don't Ever Tell Me 2 05/09/2009
    Phoenix That Doesn't Fly 4 05/23/2009
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