Thoughts of you

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    Thoughts of you

    My love for you is stronger than a ocean tide,
    It takes two, to walk with pride.

    Be there for me,show me you care,
    No other man will ever compare.

    Im here for you day and night, "where are you''
    Nowhere in sight.

    Wipe my ears tears, so i can see,
    That wonderful life you promised me.

    I want to know how you feel inside,
    Your heart and soul you can confied.

    No one knows what life may bring,
    In my heart your everything.

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    kittman101 commented on Thoughts of you

    07-13-2009

    wow i feel a deep saddness,. This truly feels like someone has confessed their love to someone who hurt them. Wanting them to understand how much they are truly loved and what they mean. Awesome way to roll the emotions into the words.

    nhorlandi commented on Thoughts of you

    04-30-2009

    first line - delate "a" fifth line - cut "where are you" & paste it under or beside "nowhere in sight" This is not to bother the rhyming line. Over all rhymes excellent...well penned

    BridgetBowen commented on Thoughts of you

    04-10-2009

    Very touching and a profound cry to be noticed...something we all need.

    dixiemom commented on Thoughts of you

    03-26-2009

    I really liked it felt the emotion in it.Thanks for sharing

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